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Re: Should we take the troops out of Iraq?
I point out the bare facts, however harsh they may be. Liberals are traitors and have been for the last fifty years. That is by no stretch of the imagination ...
Jul 12, 2008 -
Re: Should we take the troops out of Iraq?
Well, finally, somebody has pointed out the blatantly obvious fact that there are many traitors in America. Whinebaggers who say they support the troops, but then don't support what they're ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: Would you pay to remove ads?
It's not a bad idea, but I personally would not pay. The ads just don't bother me enough. I accept £1 is a pretty low rate compared to some sites, ...
Jul 10, 2008 -
Re: The Bible: Literal or Allegory?
I think it means, the Earth was immovable from it's orbit. Simple explanation, really. The Earth is quite capable of moving from its orbit, and it has in all likelihood ...
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: Gun Laws
See, I think part of the problem when talking about this is the situation varies so completely. In the UK, for example, we have very little gun crime, and some ...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: the unknown
groaning,swaying There should be a space between the , and the word 'swaying'. the stairs you enter I don't think 'entering stairs' really works. would never dare go. Too many ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: Blackbeards tale
I really, really liked this. It's simplicity is also it's strength. was at the end of its spool 'Spool' seems to be like a desperate word to find something that ...
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Re: Ancient Chemical Substance
One of the most original pieces of writing that I have ever come across. An excellent delivery of a well thought out idea. Well done! I couldn't find anything to ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: Greg
I agree that there is overall a lack of emotion or true drama to the story. It seems fairly watered down, without truly exploring the subject matter. However, apart from ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: Smiling's A Good Start
I really enjoyed that. Sometimes the dialogue felt a little bit forced, too stiff and formal, but overall it was good. You're grammar was excellent, as was your character development. ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: whatever title you want
It is an interesting poem. However, telling us you 'don't care' what we have to say is very insulting. There a lot of very talented people in this site, most ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: Enchanting Rome Part II
Brilliant! Outstanding! Some other words that don't occur to me right this second! Poetically written, with excellent dialogue, description and character depth. This is one of my favorite pieces of ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: Linda
I am going to confess that the poem didn't really do anything for me. I didn't particularly understand it, and it didn't grip me at all. However, please don't take ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: Thirteen Kisses: Part Two
Very well written! You're dialogue is wonderfully realistic. But for those of us who have never taken Spanish it can be a bit confusing, so I would recommend adding captions, ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: When I Was Young
Really nice imagery. Perhaps it's just me, but I felt like the poem was missing a line. It seemed to cut off very abruptly. Still, very well written, and an ...
Jun 29, 2008
